
HELL I WAS GOING I don't know if the hell I was going through was helpful but it seemed necessary Got my money wire-worked to where my housing, entertainment and groceries are paid, Without a preacher she's just a guest in my house... gROWN UP WOMEN WANTED... TO PLAY WAITRESS IN A DINER PHOTOplay With JUST HER AND one customer at the counter; a regular, TITLE: HELL I WAS GOING WAITRESS LOOKS AT PLATE OF FOOD WAITRESS: (UNDER HER BREATH BARELY AUDIBLE) "Honest I don't know how they eat this stuff all the time," (A VOICE-OVER OF HER THOUGHTS CONTINUES) "THOUGH; it Is sit-down and friendly with BOTTOMLESS MUG OF COFFEE; (girlishly) but should i let him feel myself for a good tip? (calculatingly) or just brush by! and always BE a little too close! that gets the job done! freezing them— intimidated in their groping thoughts! They pay up for their obvious guilt at NO LONGER CONTROLLING WOMAN;" customer: "like the good old days. when you could take a family of four to Tiger Stadium for a double souski!" (off stage/Voice Over voice shouts in a Hamtramck accent: "a polish sawbuck") "I remember; $20.00; and make her carry the cooler because you want a souvenir,
Kaline's fuckin' hat cap And THE OLD LADY WON'T LET A GUN IN THE HOUSE so I hide my pistol remembering it's batcave location when she gives me that helping of hell I got coming I CANNOT CEASE DISCUSSION OF IT UPON MY ORDERS? LOVE CHERISH AND OBEY! SOMEONE MUST BE HEAD OF THE HOUSEHOLD! IN THIS SOCIETY WHEN A WOMAN," (motioning to Waitress) "HAS THE FAR SUPERIOR PROFESSIONAL CAREER..." WAITRESS (STERNLY): "AUTOMATICALLY HER MAN GETS SCRUTINIZED! IMMEDIATELY! IS HE A BUM? what has HE DONE? WHAT ABOUT HIS FAMILY do they have money?" (in a whisper) "HE BELIEVES EVERYTHING SHOULD BE FREE" (continuing soberly) "To do WELL BY YOURSELF YOU MUST learn to ignore anything, no; everything said behind your back..." CUSTOMER: "and quit EXPECTING GRATITUDE." B/W WITH SLOW DREAMLIKE QUALITY TO DIALOGUE TO FILL IN TIME MULTIPLE CUTAWAYS VARIOUS IMAGES/EYE CANDY SEGUE WAY: COLOR SHOT AND SOUND OF MOCKINGBIRD IN FRONT YARD TREE
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